My STORY
I just finished my first chapter! if your (janet) reading this! please comment on this post!! i put our notebook in my locker and i wrote like 5 pages. I totally lost against Anabelle in tennis yesterday by like 1 to 6. It was terrible, but i guess that was my first game, so that's okay. I think that your story is great! << moonbeam cafe. i think its somewhat better than mine. HEHE.. and i'm not excited for friday. i want to stay at home all day for CSAPS! When you join tennis next year. I'm definately going to beat you if your going to be there for Grandviews. I didn't beat Anabelle. BTW, she's way too good!
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AHA when i played annabelle we tied[but that was playing without rules LOL so...]. my story is NOT better...at all...whatso ever. trust me on that. [NO ARGUING]. we both have faults and strong points in our stories, and both of them are still in progress so we can't judge now. aha. and i couldn't get the notebook, they wouldn't let me go upstairs T^T
[um i know you said on your post but the word verificaion thing was covered up by a picture and wouldn't let me send so i'll sent it here..sorry its so long]
-The extravagent structures of the building caught me off balance[extravagant]
-I never recieved as a middle schooler.[received]
-As my hiccuping continued[hiccupping]
-style, she looked too poor to even afford a cell phon and on top of that[phone]
-We were inseperable since the day we met[inseparable]
-Dream. We formed this band as freshmans when we met Keving and Josh.[kevin? maybe mistake?]
-as I passed through the many buildings. Everything seemed enormous and the numbers in my [heaad] were confusing
-he helped me put my luggages back into the room.[luggage no "s"]
-constantly wiped the sceen and I kept [screen]
-This women was annoying me to death[woman]
-I need to get my phone back from that stupid sountry girl![country?]
-The nostalgic tone of her voice sent a cacaphony [cacophony]
-like the squeakiest voice in elemtary[elementary]
-looked down at my oblete pair of clothing[oblate?]
-"That's so cool! I definately love this school!"[definitely]
-Kevin plays the drums and Daivd is [David? maybe?]
-"hames is the serious charismatic type [James]
i know what your thinking [SMARTY PANTS how did you find that many] lol i didn't....microsoft word did all the work for me. i just looked at all the red underlined words...hope it helped!
i don't know how to explain it ^^" sorry i just couldn't send it..it was prolly just my computer. LOL and oblete...i guys thats not in microsoft's vocubulary ^^"
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